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Monday, April 2, 2012

Mommy's? Back Pockets

Standing in line!
Hayride to come!
Boy so excited!

Standing in line!
Hayride to come!
Boy getting distracted...

Standing in line?
Hayride to come?
Boy getting bored!

Standing in line?
Hayride to come?
Boy begins whining!

Standing in line?
Hayride to come?
Boy grabbing pockets!

Standing in line!
Hayride to come?
Mommy NOT mine!?!

Standing in line...
Hayride has come,
Boy crying, embarrassed!

3 comments:

  1. Thanks to Michelle @ Literacy Learning Zone for inspiring me to write in this style!

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  2. Love this! The three words. The repetition. The change of punctuation! And the transition of changes of the boy while waiting for the hay ride - what fun! I hope the boy finally enjoyed the hay ride in the end!

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  3. I loved the changing punctuation to create different meanings. So you have Michelle to help guide you to create poems? If so, lucky you!

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